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I like the part when you talked about the spider and said that it had 8 legs.Next time clear sentences would help me to understand your writing.why did you decide to talk about a spider?
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I like the part when you talked about the spider and said that it had 8 legs.
ReplyDeleteNext time clear sentences would help me to understand your writing.
why did you decide to talk about a spider?