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Good work Keil, you clearly spent a long time on this. I like the way you have used your bossy verbs. Next time you could check that each sentence ends in a full stop.
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Good work Keil, you clearly spent a long time on this. I like the way you have used your bossy verbs. Next time you could check that each sentence ends in a full stop.
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