Persuasive writing
Dear Council
My name is Keil and I think we should make a shooting range in Greymouth because it will show people how to use a gun properly and safely.
If we had a shooting range it would be good to show us how to hold it and how it shoots. It can also teach us about how a gun kicks back.
The shooting range will help more people get into shooting which will give them something to do. A shooting range would be good for hand and eye coordination.
In conclusion Greymouth needs a shooting range to give something to do and teach gun safety.
From Keil
Today we have done Persuasive writing and I write about a shooting range I am writing to the Council it is good to have one because it helps your eye and hand conclusion it toke me ages so I hope you enjoy it.
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